托福写作
 
托福写作范文二

 

下面是北纬托福给考生整理范文,里面有一些亮点以及生词,考生熟悉一下,参考那些亮点自己有那些地方是自己没有掌握的,希望可以帮助到考生。

    Live life in a hurry or at a slower pace?

  Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their

  time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support

  your answer.

  『分析』

  两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。

  我们真正希望的是,不慌不忙(with full composure),却很有效率(efficient)。所以,我更倾向于careful

  planning。[51],因为careful planning是成功的关键。

  另外,也要看是什么样的事情,工作、学习,都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible),但

  是与朋友消遣,与家人相伴,却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up),而应该at a slower place。

  『范文』

  I used to live at a frantic pace. My wristwatch dictated my life, and the hands of the clock pushed me forward   to my next appointment, my next assignment, and my next social engagement. However, I have managed to relax.

  Now that I live my life at a slower pace I have become a better student, a more reliable friend, and a person who enjoys life much more than before.

  Living life at a slower pace has allowed me to pay much more attention to detail and to work through my

  Edited by Lost Lawyer

  assignments at school more thoroughly. Before I was always rushing through my reading and my writing, and my

  concentration was not very strong. The clubs and sports teams I belonged to demanded a lot of attention. After I

  decided to get rid of some of the more involved activities I had more time to focus on my studies and the results

  have shown in my marks.

  While I am still busy with school and extra curricular activities, I also make a point of slowing down and taking

  a step back in order to prioritize the things in my life. This allows me to evaluate how much time I should spend

  on one thing or another. For example, while I was hurrying through my schedule I often lost track of my friends. I

  forgot about dates that we made and things that I agreed to do for them. This will not happen now. By slowing

  down the tempo and realizing how important my pals are to me, I have once again become a reliable friend.

  Lastly, living life at a slower pace allows me to appreciate the good things in my life. In the past I would only

  think about the things I would have to get accomplished next. This anticipation did not allow me to concentrate on

  the moment, but now I am able to enjoy a family dinner or an afternoon at the movies with my friends without

  worrying about what I am supposed to do next.