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       Is money the most important aspect of a job?
　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money
　　a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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　　『分析』
　　不能同意。绝对词：the most important。
　　参见：[48]
　　『范文』
　　完美重排版
　　Edited by Lost Lawyer
　　I understand that nowadays it is very important for people to earn a lot of money. As a matter of fact, many
　　people equate money with success: the more money you earn, the more successful you are. However, the financial
　　aspect is not the most important aspect of a job. The work environment and camaraderie with one's coworkers, the
　　personal fulfillment from one's occupation, and the opportunity to balance professional and personal lives are
　　much more important.
　　People who spend forty hours a week or more at their place of employment should enjoy their work
　　environment, especially the company of their co-workers. After all, the prospect of having to spend any amount of
　　time in a room or a building with people who one does not respect, who are unpleasant, or, even worse, hostile, will
　　have a very negative effect on one's disposition and mental health. A few more dollars in the bank account cannot
　　compensate for this.
　　Similarly, one should derive a special fulfillment or pleasure from doing one's job. Normally, a person will
　　spend at least a third of his/her adult life at work (eight hours or more every day). One should not waste this time by
　　doing work that is boring or tedious even if it is well paid. The money earned will only enrich the life away from
　　work but not enhance the work experience.
　　Finally, the personal life can only be enjoyed adequately if there is enough time away from the professional
　　life. Affluence affords many nice things, such as houses or cars or television sets, but a person who has to work
　　night and day will not be able to derive any pleasure from them. Also, a father or a mother who makes a lot of
　　money might be able to provide his or her family with a comfortable life, but how much good does that do if he or
　　she never sees them? Time spent with family, especially children, is invaluable, and thus a job with long hours
　　might cost a person more than it affords.
第二天托福写作高分范文：
    Should one judge a person by external appearances?
　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external
　　appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
　　『分析』
　　表明只能“部分同意”的立场。然后写两大段，举若干个例子。
　　很多的情况下，确实不应该根据外表判断一个人。
　　但也有一些情况下，必须根据外表判断。比如，导演选择演员;招聘零售柜台店员等等。
　　Edited by Lost Lawyer
　　People should look beyond superficial appearances. All too often we judge people quickly, and we do not take
　　the time to gel to know them. We draw conclusions based on prior experiences and stereotypes. Of course, there
　　are situations in which judging a person based on appearance is necessary, but such quick conclusions can lead to
　　serious misjudgments, and they often prevent progressive change within society.
　　As time is limited, we often don't have enough of it to get to know a person well, and thus we are forced to
　　form an opinion hastily. During a job interview, for example, decisions have to be made very quickly. If the
　　applicant for an office job does not dress in accordance with the standards of the employer, he will probably not
　　get hired for the position, although he might be the best qualified candidate overall. Another applicant will take
　　his place, because his qualifications, including his ability to dress and present himself professionally, appear to
　　address the needs of the company better.
　　In most other cases, however, judging based on external appearance can lead to many misjudgments. An old
　　person is not necessarily wiser than a young person, because wisdom is the result of experience and not age. A
　　person dressed in old jeans and tennis shoes does not have to be poor or without means, she might merely prefer
　　the comfort of her old clothes to the discomfort of high heels and business suits.
　　Judgments based on appearance will also prevent progressive change within society, because people will come
　　to conclusions based on stereotypes. For example, a person with very dark skin might be from an African country,
　　but he/she might also be from another continent altogether. Likewise, his/her skin color does not reveal anything
　　about his/her likes or dislikes, his/her character traits or personality. Nevertheless, almost every person will
　　invariably jump to conclusions on all of these, thereby precluding any contact or true understanding of the person
　　and his/her background. As a result, common perceptions will persist and no progressive change will take place.