托福写作
 
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托福独立写作模板
一、观点对比型1
  Some people like A; others like B. Which one do you prefer—A or B?
  (1) No doubt, I choose A, because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages. But B on the other hand, has advantages no more than its disadvantages.
  The most important benefit of A is that___________________.
  To achieve the same effect, B will__________________.
  Another benefit of A, which B almost cannot achieve, is that___________________.
  Although B also has its seemingly profound advantages, it can only be achieved conditionally because_________________________.
  After understanding the reasoning above, it is quite safe now to say: to choose A is a wise action.
  (2) Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer__________ because I think A has more advantages.
  There are numerous reasons why________, and I would here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that___________. It can be given a concrete example_____________.
  Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that___________. Take the case of a thing that_______________.
  One very strong argument for A is that__________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that_____________________.
  Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, __________.
  But if all these factors are complicated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_________________.

 二、观点对比型2
  Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.
  (1) Some people believe that________________. Other people hold the opinion that_________. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinions about it.
  For A, ___________________.
  But this also demonstrates that______________.
  Moreover, _______________________.
  B, on the other hand, _______________. For example, ________________.
  In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways: First, _________________. Second, ______________________.
  (2) A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused a heated debate for a long period. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we do not see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.
  Some people believe B because______________. These people point out the fact that______________. They also argue that_______________________.
  However, other people stand on a very different ground, they believe that____________. They firmly point out that______________________. An example can give the details of this argument: ___________________. In addition, ____________________________.
  In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has________.

三、支持反对型
  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? AAA.
  (1) There is no need for me to put any emphasis on what the advantages of AAA are. ___________________. Many people believe that____________________.
  However, I disagree with the title statement because I consider___________________.
  On the other hand, one of the notorious disadvantages of AAA is that_______________. The modern example of this is_____________________. So if this is prevalent, _______________. Another factor shows that__________________. So, as I see it, _________.
  (2) Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguments on both sides. People who support AAA usually give some, even all of the following reasons.
  The first is that_______________________.
  The second is that____________________________.
  Third, ___________________________________.
  Generally, people who attack AAA claim that ______________________. They also often say that there will be problems of ____________________.
  As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that there are three main reasons why I support AAA. Firstly, ___________________. Secondly, ______________. Furthermore, __________________.

四、观点选择型
  …A, B, C, D… Which do you choose?
  (1) It appears, in so many aspects, very difficult to prefer one to another because all of them have their advantages and disadvantages to the extent that it is hard to distinguish.
  Yet that does not mean they are of the same to me. To be frank, I would prefer A if personal quality is considered as a criterion to choose things.
  Then why do I prefer A? I like it because it can _______________, thus makes me ______________.
  There is another reason why I choose A, in terms of ________, __________. No wonder, it again brings me convenience that I cannot get if I choose any one of the others.
  That last reason is that_____________________.
  In conclusion, everybody wants to choose the one that fits him/her. So it is of great benefits for me to choose.
  (2) How to do XXX/Whether the traditional methods such as A, B and so on or the modern method for example C and D has its advantages and disadvantages. Which you would prefer depends on your own experience, life style and emotional concern. However, I would prefer C. There are three advantages of C as follow:
  This can trace back to my childhood. Once with curiosity, I__________________.
  Yet another reason is that_________. I can quote a common example. _______________.
  Then why I do not like others? For example, why I do not like A? Because I have a bad experience with it. _______________. So, even when anyone mentioned it, I would catch a feeling of fear.
  There are still many other reasons that can account for my fondness for it, but the obvious ones have been presented as above.

五、问题分析型
  …XXX…What do you think about it?
  (1) There are numerous approaches to solving XXX/impacts on XXX/characteristics of XXX, and I would explore the most conspicuous ones here.
  One of the primary method/One of the primary impacts/ One of the primary characteristics, to my mind, is that_________________.
  A more subtle point which we must consider is that___________________.
  In addition/Furthermore, __________________.
  In conclusion/Taking into account of all these methods/effects/aspects, we may reach the conclusion that________________________.
  (2) Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, three conspicuous aspects are as follows.
  One of the primary causes is that______________________.
  XXX also results from_______________________.
  ____________________is responsible for XXX, as well.
  To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A, B and C are three main contributors to XXX.

 

对立类  (就一个事物判断是与否agree or disagree)

In daily life, so many problems are worth considering carefully.

With the development/introduction…, xxx are more and more +adj/ become adj increasingly.

Xxx often face the dilemma of whether to…… As what has been come up with, when you face/when it comes to /there is a public debate today that/recently the problem has been brought into focus that… …… What is your choice and what is your opinion? Some hold the view that…... while the others have a negative attitude. However, with all aspects carefully considered, I believe that……would be a better choice.

好开头

Have you ever been to ……/have you ever + 过去分词/received/faced/experienced……?

Have you ever been to ……/have you ever + 过去分词/received/faced/experienced……?

Have you ever been to ……/have you ever + 过去分词/received/faced/experienced……?
If you had never had these experiences, you would never know/ feel/ learn/ realize/ understand……+how much fun/interesting/significant……xxx could bring you.

中间

举例:
1. To illustrate this point clearly, there is an appropriate example that is very persuasive.

1. This can be clearly illustrated in the case of sb. Who…

2. Two striking examples that aptly illustrate this point involve the area of astronomy and space exploration.

3. Common sense indicates that…

3. what is more, a study of …..will make this point clearer.

Why……?.The answer to this problem involves many factors.

 

1. The chief reason for my propensity for A is that...

2. Just imagine what it would be like if……

2. Another reason why I choose A is that I believe that/ can be seen by every person that

3. Finally, and perhaps most importantly, there is another essential factor that deserves some words here.

3. Finally, and perhaps most importantly, I do not deny that xxx has its own merits such as … but…


结尾(A类=让步+结论   B类=结论)

A类中的让步同样可以这样:

I concede that xxx, certainly, has its own merits/advantages. 后面 + 一大堆“一句话例子”。However, if all these aspects contemplated, the advantages of A carry weight than those of B. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as my final choice (for the ……to ….)    


B类中只有结论:一定是转折开头but ,as xxx, we had better……记住不一定用什么to sum up/in conclusion……有时候一个转折词更能体现鲜明的逻辑关系,用别的反而模糊了。这样我们的B类的最后两段就分别完成了让步和结论的功能。
However, if all these aspects contemplated, the advantages of A carry weight than those of B. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as my final choice (for the ……to ….)    


      当然,如果你没有时间了,我这里同样有紧急方案,而且效果同样很好。
      这样地结尾只有两个部分:

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…/it is wiser/ sagacious… xxx has more/better (比较级), I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as the final choice for…我测了一下时间,应该可以在一分钟之内搞定结尾。(旁白:不就是背么?!唉唉唉。)

 

 

比较类 (两种事物或一个事物的两种情况比较advantage and disadvantage)

结尾和其他的不一样了,要注意始终两边说,并可以有也可以没有自己的偏向。

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, both ……and …….. are………and both are……….. However, if all these aspects contemplated, the advantages of A carry weight than those of B. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as my final choice (for the ……to ….)    
如果没提点对立面或其他选择(包括让步),是不可能上4分的。 (from redrock)